He was looking at me all the nightI would just look away.
Him and my friend are real tight
I was going to leave, then he whispered "stay"
I didn't know what to do
he was staring at me up and down.
He looked at my blouse, which was blue
nobody was around.
He started to un-boutton my blouse
I gave him a slap.
He blind folded me and took me to this deserted house
I knew this was a trap.
Everything was a blur from there
next thing I know - I'm home.
Sitting in my rocking chair
my mom yells in such an angry tone.
I start to cry, rubbing my head
my mom looks at me.
I run up to bed
and I just fall asleep.
I really liked your poem because i felt like it was Realistic and that people go through this everyday. Even if they know the person or not they still get raped.
ReplyDeleteI also liked how you rhymed your poem every other line. The best thing I liked was how you added a picture that seems that the girl is lonely and sad, because it shows alot of detail to the poem and i think that the picture goes great with your poem.